ok...bonjour, je suis nouvelle et je ne parle pas tres bie français...voila ma b.d:

I guess you're talking English, right ?

First, welcome to PSoF  :o

Thank you for having told that you're not speaking French well. Concerning your BD, which seems to be a Hoaxe, there are some problems.

Indeed, the colour of the text is not very appropriated, we cannot really read what is written. Then, there is too much spaces between each case  :(

I would advise you to seek for some topics of hoaxes over here, in order to progress  :wink:

Here are some examples. Keep going !

http://switchtc.ifrance.com/Hoaxe%20sonic%20the%20fighters/Sonicthefighters(l'hoaxenon-officiele)n%b07.GIF

http://switchtc.ifrance.com/Hoaxe%20sonic%20the%20fighters/sonicthefighters(l'hoaxenon-officiele)n%b08.GIF

(from Switch)

Hi
that is a great B.D but like he says chage the color of the police
continue!!!! you got a great idea
I want to see the next episode

bof... your sprite comic can be better. how? make words ballons. but this sprite is funny!

je ne suis pas la meiller spriter...désole. mais jai fais une autre comic, avec rouge et knuckles...et tails brulant XD!
l'ecriture est plus brillante sur selle ci.
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d146/fearmeh/l.png
and yes...I am an anglophone from Toronto.
and thanks for the comment and crits, they really help!

I've just a question (sorry for error :lol: ): You do that by machine or by hand-drawing???( I know, that surely a stupid question...)  If you do that by hand-drawing, your so good... I'l will alive (I'm not if what I say is good, just for say is "envie" the words... Sorry if is not good :wink: ) you... Lucky...

eu...c'est un sprite comic. alors c'est un dessin par ordinateur...est ce que c'est sa que tu demendais?

the lastest was better. but i haven't understood the humour at the end... but the sprite comic is good. good luck.

I think is because Rouge cannot say what she want say to Knuckles

Good continue like tath it's funny and I laugh with nothing so I love your hoax and why does rouge jump at the end?

XD

Hey, les Anglophones du dimanche, c'est pas la peine de poster en Anglais si vous ne savez même pas formuler une phrase de trois mots correctement.

Au pire, je vous proposerai de faire un topic spécialisé dans la langue anglaise... Mais mieux vaut dans ces conditions demander aux administrateurs.

Your sprite is average. In fact, all people can do the same thing. Of course and I said many times, I'm very bad to judge sprites and other drawings like this. In my opinion, go to explore this area and you'll see, many topics talk about sprites, comic sprites, something like that. Then, is not very original. And, the landscape you used in your comic is too famous.
if you can, try to do other thing or if you want to continue, try to improve your capacities in this domain.

I forgot: Welcome to planete-sonic and Good luck :wink: